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Arthur Rosch's avatar

I can imagine a better kind of human being.

More brave. More insightful. More compassionate.

I can imagine and wish

that I was that better human being but

this isn’t my time. Only a few are ready.

Even our brains can be

more effective

more conscious

some time to come. I can imagine

being a better kind of human

and maybe some day I will live

that destiny but trouble always makes a place

and the human race goes off

on a tangent

goes nuts for nothing

kills without provocation.

We must do better or vanish.

The human race? The universe teems

with life, is filled

with species, races, creatures beyond

every horizon, every direction

intelligent, inventive, kind creatures, dexterous

and wise.

Today I will become a better kind of human being.

They are out there, but No one is coming to save us. Ten thousand races of vibrant creatures

avoid this planet, know to avoid humanity for a while yet to come.

Bret Primack's avatar

The poet speaks!

Arthur Rosch's avatar

This is one of your most incredible essays, Bret. Truth it is; truth.

Manuela Thiess Garcia's avatar

Good points made here. I catch myself heavily engaged in tick-tick more often than I care to admit. It's a form of masturbation, isn't it? Little mini orasms assured by feeding into your algorhythms over and over again!

Ricky Schultz's avatar

True dat (bravo). Happy that even as a driven young A-type, I intuitively understood this. Being in nature was foundational. Later, following much hard-earned success, a nasty divorce took everything from me. The re-boot brought a whole new appreciation for…well everything. It’s been one of life’s greatest gifts…

Antonio's avatar

I belong to a pretty different culture. Not Guanajato’s but probably closer to it than your US one, despite all the brainwashing through movies, TV shows, bestsellers and other cultural banners. It makes me sad this line: “They don’t need to exploit you anymore. You exploit yourself. And you call it ambition.·” Sounds like a Supertramp’s tune. They were British. The so called “ambition” is destroying us along the greed of the 0.1% that owns a lot more than they actually deserve.

Roberta Lawrence's avatar

“We lived better against Franco” — when the murderous Franco does, uh nobody knew what to. Sex, drugs and rock n roll set in along with cultural inertia. Sunday syndrome!